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Question: Can I get some input on this reworked piece of!.!.!.insanity!?
Never in my life,
Never in my reality
Did such beauty exist!.
You're in my daily dreams!.
You're in my nightly dreams!.
Never were you invited,
Yet never I asked you to leave!.
As reality leaves me,
As so often does,
And faithful you remain!.
You seem so good to be true!.
You can't be in my reality!
You are to good to be true!.
Your existance is unreal!
Hauntingly lovely you are,
Too lovely for me
To be worthy of you;
And faithful you remain!.
You must be my imagination,
For you are too good for me
To be deserving of you!.
And with love eternal you stay!.
I would trade my sanity for you!.
I would give my soul to you
And be your loving servant!.
I'm so in love with you
Because faithful you remain!.
Together always we shall be!.
And only to those with sane eyes
Do I remain alone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
To be that good!.!. I will have to agree!.!. must be imagination!.!.!.
To have someone that enamored of myself I would find totally overwhelming!.!.!.!.
I would never thumbs down unless you asked me to!.!.!.!.
I like to make a habit of thumbs upping everybody!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is genuinely the best poem I have read on here for a long time!.
It is very emotive the lyrics get to the reader!.
I wish I really knew you as a friend so I could give you a hug!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Really, there's no need to gush, I knew you had a thing for me!.!.!. okay, I'll give you a star because you're my one and only (UGH!!!) Now really, who were you writing this for!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Toe-curlingly awful!. Stilted and repetitive!. Don't worry!.!.!.if you write a good one I'll let you know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com