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Question: Have you been trapped!?
A story: Part 218
He broke the rest of the window with an iron hinge he found on the floor of the shed!. He stood for the first time in four days and his legs gave out on him!. He grabbed the bench, steadied himself and breathed the air!. It was fresh and alive!. He removed the rest of the rope from his wrist and tossed it in an old paint bucket!. This dump could use some paint!. Yes! It was good to smile!.!.!.
His mind cleared and his legs stopped shaking as he walked towards the pale wooden door and peered through a crack in the plank!. "Walk out and away" he thought, but he saw them then, standing near the oak, smoking and laughing, trading crude jokes and wicked smiles!. How did they not hear the glass breaking!? They must have come out of the house minutes ago!. Luck!?!. He was going to need more of it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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!.!.!.but "luck" sometimes manifests itself in strange ways, so it wasn't altogether too surprising to him when he saw the outhouse suddenly drop into a gaping sinkhole, diverting their attention away from him long enough for him to pull up his pants, and disappear into the even greater danger of!.!.!.
!.!.!."The Devil's Woods!.!.!.!"Www@QuestionHome@Com
don't run!.!.don't do it!.!.!.!.!.!.they'll see you!.!.(puts the covers over my eyes)
but if you stay, they'll find you and know you tried to get away!.!.wait till they come back into the shed and shag em then tie em up and smoke their cigars!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.then blow it in their face
Then as the sunset comes down, and with the shovel over your shoulder, you slowly dissapear into the darkness!.!.never to be seen again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i am trapped in this story!.
i am very pleased to see that your talents are so strong!.
my writing is small compared to you!.
that won't stop me from writing because i write what comes to my mind!.
in my mind your man in that story will need plenty of luck to get past those fools without being heard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, But I just finished deicing a walk way and my car, Can't remember so much ice, the trees are still loaded and making eerie
crackling noises, and branches in the woods pop, snap, and thud to
the ground!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Psst, Uncle Dirty!.!.!.over here, I'll distract Whitey and Blackie and those liquored Leprechauns while you go look for your nuts!.!.!.!.hurry, I can only do so much!.
Great, pa read the other posts and is also waiting for the manuscripts to arrive!.
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sounds like a fraternity hazing trick to me
AHH the joys of higher education!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I feel like I been there!.!. des ja vous!.!.!.!.
shikes! I am there now!.!.
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I want to read the rest too!.!.
I only got to read the last one and this one!.!.
I like nuts!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
you remind me of Poe, but with a Walt Whitman twist, and Bryon's and Shelley's diction !.!.!. well done !.!.!. looking forward to reading more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Thank you!. Please Sir, may I have some more!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's only a story, it's only a story,!.!.!.
but, what next!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Is this how you punish people who don`t want to eat your sausage!?
"The Troll Hunter"Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yeah with my luck I would have never even found the iron hinge!Www@QuestionHome@Com
<<trapped in marriage!.!.!.!.felt good when I walked out!.!.!.he wasnt laughing tho!.!.!.!.
can u email us the other 217 parts please!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great! I wait with anticipation for each morsel you dish out!. More More More--Please!Www@QuestionHome@Com
thankfully, no!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yeah I only want more of that!
That's all I can say, more more!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Pissed off the wife again, did ya!?
Pretty terse situation there!.!.!.I hope there is an epilogue!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Scheherazade - eat your heart out!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is good! (Why am I not surprised)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I once had my leg caught in a trap, but I was able to escape by gnawing it off!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes I have been!.!.can you let me out
I will help him Buk!.!.!.rest eazy!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
go on!. need to hear moreWww@QuestionHome@Com
Can't wait to read what happens on Part 219!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wait!.!.!. isn't this dude ball-less!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good, I'd like to read the other 217 partsWww@QuestionHome@Com
the world!.!.!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.is so preoccupied!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.that desperate cries are unheard!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com