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Question: Do you like my 3 minute scratch rough draft poem!? Yes it needs to be corrected!!?
Can you love me like a real man Or are you going to play games with my heart!? Can you be there for me when I need you the most!? Or are you going to run away from as fast as you can!? If I reach out my hand for you!. Will you reach out youre hand back to mine!? I will listen to you anytime if you listen to me!. I want you as my Bestfriend I hope that I can be youres as well!. I want that warmth and Special feelings within me and to receive it back from you!. If you may start to have those feelings within yourself!. I might have them for you too!. Maybe this is all CRAZY!. Or maybe it might be true!. Time will tell and Time stands still!. When Im thinking about YOU!Www@QuestionHome@Com


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needs a few corrections but other then that i really like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's very sweet!. I like it!. I wonder who it's for!.Www@QuestionHome@Com