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Question: Well, what do you think!.!.!.!. (poetry)!?
Numba 1:
Thoughts through my head
Endless Emotion
Yet none to be said

You are the reasoning
Behind my being
But forever silently my lips sewn

Never again will I feel
Forever Fruitless
For my loves forever sealed

Numba 2:
I see you everyday
In a sea of faces

I will always keep away
For i am afraid

I am doomed to ever stay
Alone without you

Numba 3:
"I love you"
I'll say it again if you need me to
My love for you has long been abloom
But that amazing day I waited for, now
Forever on, I'll always wonder how
You ever came to utter words so true
That skipped my heart
"I love you too"

Numba 4:
A single life
A single soul
A single love
A single toll
Forever single all these will be
But study hard and they're not single you see

Numba 5:
A truth lies deep within the glass
Sadly never shall I pass
On looking I stare at the thing
It stares back, Never blinking
It looks so lonely, confused, and sad
But in the mirror I know things are only half bad

Numba 6: ( Thank god this is the last one right!?)
A light shimmers in the dark
An eerie glow it gives
Should you trust it
For what it seems
Or is it something mean
Take a chance
Venture on
And maybe you will find something
Of Pleasure
Or something of a demon's mind!.

and if you want reply which is your fav and why!.!.!.!. thanks ^_^
-Have a great day,liwymiWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I enjoyed #6 best, but your work has so much potential that it is difficult to pick one!.

Enter your poetry separately so that we can comment on one, not a batch!. When you post as a batch it lessens the value you place on your work!. tWww@QuestionHome@Com

I loved the first two! They were really good! I can really relate to them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's great!. you have some good talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com