I'm writing a 1st birthday poem for my cousin, any ideas for improvement?

Question: I'm writing a 1st birthday poem for my cousin, any ideas for improvement!?

I am going to have a drawing of a pig with a speech bubble with the poem in it!. any insight!?

My name is Pinky and I am a pig
It’s your first birthday; your getting big!
I must be going, I can’t stay
But have a joyful time on this special day

how does that sound!? i'm not too sure about the second verse, any other suggestions!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think it's very cute actually!. But um I guess I can take a shot:

My name is Pinky, the Birthday Pig
It's your first birthday, and my you're getting big!
I must be going but I came to say
"Have a happy one year on this special day"

Ugh!. I tried!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't worry about it!.!.!.he probably can't read it anyway!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

and I hope this card isnt all you get I hope you get A bunch of s&$TWww@QuestionHome@Com

sounds nice just like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's great!Www@QuestionHome@Com