Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> How's my poem??? Thanks for your input?


Question: How's my poem!?!?!? Thanks for your input!?
It should've came with a warning
my heart turned blu
i had teary eyes
i still looked okay
the pain was inside
behind my smile hid a frown
thought it would keep me up but all it ever did was bring me down
it consumed my mind
the thought of it hurt me more
i had misunderstood the whole time
its not a fairytale like they said
i'm not a princess!. there's no glass slipper and a pretty little dress
before i realized this it was too late
love should've came with a warningWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is very good considering everything u have been through very beautiful Its almost as I can realate other peoples situation with this like other people with same problem can read this and feel the way u do very good from 1-10 I give 100000000000000000000000000000000000Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well I always write poems and lyrics and yours is really good the begining wasn't appealing though it got alot better!. Good Luck with your writing oh poetry can become an addiction so always have a pencil and paper handy to jott down ideas :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it !!! it so amazing congratulationWww@QuestionHome@Com

seriously beautiful, amazing !.!. I love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

pretty goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it! We all should be more cautious in love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice!. it is a sad one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com