Can poetry be like food...care for a piece of Seuss-shi?

Question: Can poetry be like food!.!.!.care for a piece of Seuss-shi!?

(in the simple style of Dr Seuss)

Pillow talk
by Jellz Fisher 081220

Pillow said
To the head
Mornings come
You’re not dead

So give thanks
Life surprises
As sure as sure
Sun it rises

Much to do
Horizons new
Follow them
They’re showing you

Pillow, down
Home to nest
Head it said
Now let’s rest

Thank you bed
Dreams not dead
Pillow knows
Head it saidWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

But!.!.!.!.
In the night
Jellz wakes up
Pillow yells
"Please dont bite!"

Sorry mate!.
Dream did that!.
Christmas treat,
had to eat!.

Back to sleep
counting sheep!.
Pillow slides,
floor collides!

Head is flat!.
Hair turns mat!.
Pillow sighs,
JellZ, wide eyes!

Pillow grins,
'im down here'
Pancake chin!
Wrinkly ear!

Pillow back!.
Fluffy sack!.
Other side,
ahhh, face resides!.

Snooze along
teeth sawyer,
Pillow talk
Lawn mowers!.

Pillow 2
bonks one off!
JellZ says huh!?
whats the scoff!?!?

Pillow 1
says thank you 2
Jellz closed eyes
shut like glue!.

Sheet comes off
says enough!
Pillow 1
you have it tough!.

Legs get cold
Jellz must stir
Pillow 2
now feet fur!.

Sheet just laughs
the alarm goes riiinngggg!!
Pillow 2
snagged toe bling!.

Goosebump Jellz
falls out of bed
throws the bell
clear to hell

"Mornings come,
Im not dead!
Give me thanks
special bed"

!.!.!.i!.!.!.just!.!.couldnt!.!.!.stop!.!.!.!! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like this so much, especially 'Dreams not dead!." I have so many dreams and they are so hard to accomplish!. At night I dream of home and friends!. In the daytime I dream of the future!. All the time I dream of "Horizons new!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

The pillow knows!
Best pillow talk I've heard in awhile!
*sighs*

ma

really liked "horizons new, follow them, they're showing you!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

okay,,, now ya done it,,, I got this stuck in my head and it will not leave

then again,,,

isn't that what good verse is supposed to do !? why, yes, I believe it is just so!.

very well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This one
is the one
I'm retiring on!.

My pillow IS calling!.

Thanks for the light heartedness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed your Sushi, Suess style!. Enjoy your pillow upon which your head does lay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is to deep to be a Seuss poem but the style is perfect form for this one!

Keep writing and I'll keep reading!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is exactly what I need right now!. Light, fun words!.
Thank you Jellz!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was cute, it's amazing how you do so well while being upside down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A very fun and intriguing side of you!. I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dr!. Suess rules! Love the poem!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Please kill me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My pillow goes every where with me!.!. It is likely time for a new one but I know and love this one so well!.!.!.!.!. How can I abandon it for another!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

im not sure thats a question but it aint bad, it has a nice flow, try using longer lines in ur stanzasWww@QuestionHome@Com

My pillow just has slobber stains on itWww@QuestionHome@Com

If my pillow could
talk I'd be a tad!.!.!.!.
red!.Www@QuestionHome@Com