Do you like this poem if you do please read my others an coment?

Question: Do you like this poem if you do please read my others an coment!?

Opening your eyes"

Come with me
To a place far away
come with me and live
find yourself in things we pay no attention to
come and open your eyes to the wonders around us
no longer can sadness dwell in you
open up your heart for your love to live
feel your self become one with the world
so come on my journey
and be free find the things i have
see the things you cant even Imagain
and all you have to do is open your eyesWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

poems don't have to rhyme!. i think it could mean a number of different things to everybody!. but to me, its like just let go of all of your pain and saddness, live here in the moment!. look at the good things in life instead of just the bad!. overall i think it is a very good poem!. Great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't see a pattern, but I do see a message!. you could stand to make it stronger, though!. also, punctuation is your friend if you put it in the right places!. making complete statements in a poem sometimes creates more of an impact!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you just want us all to read the rest of your rubbish!. The fact that you are only thirteen simply means that you have plenty of time to find something that you are good at!. Ten Points!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

doesn't really rhyme
plus doesn't make sense to meWww@QuestionHome@Com

its alrightttWww@QuestionHome@Com

I reckon It's pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com