How do U rate this poem?

Question: How do U rate this poem!?

Out of 5 stars!? *****

"LIFE IS LIKE A RIVER"

Life is like
A river
The leaves of
The past
Keep flowing
Forward
Down the river of
Life
Creating the present
Reality
You can try
Paddling backwards
But it will never
Work
So just accept what
Life has to
Offer
And keep paddling
Forward!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Four stars, It's a bit choppy in some places but overall, very good!. Calming!.
It tells you that you can't go back to the past so you must move on!.
Very good!.
How old are you, anyway!? lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

*** i really like it its got a point and its clever but will you please do summin about the libe separation it makes reading it all juddery

apart fromthat awesome poam maaaaan

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