Comment on this poem, I did it yesterday in honor of my dead ancestors.?

Question: Comment on this poem, I did it yesterday in honor of my dead ancestors!.!?

I had a tough time getting the flow right but I finally got it right!.

~~~The Rhythm of the Past~~~
Roses are red, violets are purple!.
Some poems rhyme, but this one don't!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Ah, i understand, i wouldn't call it a "poem" but i know how you feel!. The sadness dwells inside of you, you can't stay in touch with your dead ancestors, thats why this one doesn't rhyme, you have lost connection to them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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How would you like to join your ancestors!?Www@QuestionHome@Com