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Question: What do you thing about this poem!.!.!.!?
_COCO'S_

We are the laughs
and the tears

We are the plain
and the luxury

We are the wisest
and the most childish

We are the most romantic love story
and the most adventurous escapade

We are the most imaginative fantasy
and the most real reality

We are the wind's swish
and the wave's tumultuous

We are today's wish
and tomorrow's miracle

We are the rain's rainbow
and the pole's aurora

We are the horizon's orange
and the skies blue

We are six
and we are one

we are
PENTA COCO'S PLUS ONE
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(To my louphly priends!.!.!.!.Lusia!.!.!.Yuanita!.!.!.Meygi!.!.!.Shi!.!.!. you all galz T_TWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Rather good poem!.
Hmm, wow, each line in a stanza is an antithesis of the other line in the same stanza!. And it fits in perfectly!. And it associates with the experiences you've gone through, and it's very personal!.
And the structure of the poem, is such that it's 11 stanzas of two lines!. Any symbolism to that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's actually pretty good!. happy go lucky!. :) must have some awesome friends!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty cool!. creative and imaginative!. I like it!. :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

A nice piece of writing for your friends!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very kewlkewl!!! Great friendship!!! :D

Hope it helps!!Www@QuestionHome@Com