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Question: Please tell me how my poem is!?
I gave you my heart
I gave you my soul
and you once said to me
don't worry I'll never let you go
false promises you made to me
I never thought you'd be the way you are
but guess I was wrong
whatever happened to don't worry babe
I'm here for you now
false promises you made to me
I knew it was too good to be true
you once said I love you
I wanna be with you was that all lies too
I gave you my heart and now I wonder why
I did such a foolish thing
and have my heart pulverized
was I that weak and defenseless
and you once said
I'll be here to
Take all your fears away
Take all your tears away
Take all your misery away
false promises you mae to me
so just do me a favor
and keep all you false promises to yourself
and never do come back to me ever again!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's a lovely poem!.
Very raw, deep emotions used!
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Generic, bleeding with teen angst like 99% of poetry posted here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

runs on to long and at the end it sounds like you don't care if he/she comes back so why did you bother!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds great!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty good but it needs some rhymingWww@QuestionHome@Com

eh it was okay but it kinda sounded more lyk a story!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's pretty good!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com