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Question: Would you comment on a poem about a satisfied angel!?
angel radar draws her to pain
blue wings flutter then
spread wide
engulfing a heart in anguish
staying until your tears are
dried
flying a little too close
now to the ground
she looks back
seeing you standing
tall
never having heard the rustle or
felt the brush
of her tender wings
and she smilesWww@QuestionHome@Com


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That which touches us the most never grazes our skin!. Thank you for showing this in an almost silent whisper, beauty and perfection!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love this poem it has great imagery!. Something about the way its written as I started reading it slow and then sped up through it, well like flying - and smiling!?

Only the first line should it be angel radar draws herself to pain!? Not sure there!. Again, I think this is really beautiful!. Thank you for posting it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's really beautiful

My angel not only watches over me!.!.!.
!.!.!.she's there to help me up when I'm down!.!.!.
!.!.!.she's my angel flying too close to the ground!.

http://uk!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=8jfBxfltYD!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is my second brush with this angel in the course of one day!.
I must say I can feel her presence and the current from her wings stirs the air around me!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awwwwww!.!.!.!.!.this is a beautiful poem about a true angel!.!.!.!.I love it!. I particularly loved the last few lines!.!.!.!.!.good to see a happy ending!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now this one I felt, right to the core of my heart and soul!.
Thanks Ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Easy needs a
poem above her
bed!. Found it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How cute,i loved the smile part at the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have a way of doing that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

loved it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sweet :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice Ma And it has a happy ending!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very sweet!.!.!.:) ((ma))Www@QuestionHome@Com