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Question: This is my poem (dissed) tell me how you like it!?
it was warm, and breezy night you told me that i was beautiful so i felt like the time was right, you whispered in my ear stop shaking i'm gonna take my time and do this right!. while under the moon we made love you told me i would always be the one you think of, the fire burning between us that nite made me feel so alive that i just knew one day i'd be your wife, after we did the dance you stayed away!. lying and telling me what iam assuming was all a dream, after that nite you stopped pursuing me, only to follow up with another chick and when you saw me you just walked pass me and your eyes went through me!. aw the pain the hurt i went through because i gave you something that was of value, how could you!? it's been 2 years sents that nite passed and i'll never forget how you moved on so fast!. dayum i had it bad cause i thought this here would last!. i'll never forget you, or that pain of that summers past!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It sounds like a really sad experience, and well-written too!.

There's a few spelling and grammar mistakes, however, such as "nite" (which should be "night") and "sents" (should be "since!.")Www@QuestionHome@Com

Most definitely dissed!. But a good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW! That's amazing! I like it alot, its real touching!Www@QuestionHome@Com

dayum!.!.!.sounds like a cold hearted experience!.Www@QuestionHome@Com