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downpour of rain for several days
along with the Christmas blues
has kept me housebound, behind in my shopping,
groceries to buy, breads yet to be baked,
but I don't care, so I
sit and stare at the grayness both in and out
doorbell rings unexpectedly,
begrudgingly I get up to answer
there before me were total strangers
assembled, though soaking wet,
with smiles upon faces and a song
in their hearts!. I looked into eyes
as they lifted their voices
knowing all they wanted in return
was to see if their joy
brought a smile to me
one look and they knew
my spirit no longer
was dampenedWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your poem sings of spirits uplifted by the kindness of strangers!. Something we can all pass on to another!. Beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

'Well I love the rainy nights
I love the rainy nights
I love to hear the thunder
watch the lightnin'
as it lights up the sky
don't it make you feel good!.!.!."

Can't recall the singer but it rocks!.!.!.so dos your poem ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem is lovely!.

Although you mention rain, and kind of a feeling of cold, blue, etc!. the end conjures up warmth!.

It's like coming in from the snow to a hot cup of hot chocolate!. Thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

how sweet! You have captured what every caroler hopes for --to bring joy to others--i used to carol strangers doors, now my friends are the only ones i carolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome! Totally awesome! Sometimes it pays to answer the door when we not feel well!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's very good!. Reminds me of the gray damp weather we are having now!. Makes me want to forget about Christmas and just crawl back into bed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice Ma!. We Christmas Caroled with my church on year and the smile was all we were hoping for!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Smiling faces singing will brighten the day for most!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love when it rains!.
"The Troll Hunter"Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is a Christmas gift you got straight from God to lift your spirits!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it's really good!. i write poetry and i like people to read mine and let me know what they think too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good,I wish it would rain instead of snow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE poems about songs!.!.!.
My pals and I went singing
one Christmas!.!.!. we heard

"oh my god!.!.!.!. SLAM"

Hooyah!Www@QuestionHome@Com