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~ Approaching matters, eyes wide open Not cringing, defying…no fear Questioning, options and hoping Approaching matters, eyes wide open Resolution, is very clear Of certainties in life and coping Approaching matters, eyes wide open Not cringing, defying …no fear ~ ~Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: On the day of December 16, 1962 a little spark made her way to a world she SCREAMED, " Oh no, what have I done"!. Happy Day for the child within!. Night approached and confusion set in!. Cell phones beeping my child was weeping He was angry with the punisher Oh, what can a mother do!? Relax, give in and remember this man sees the exterior he cannot hear He is blind, deaf and dead!. Rattled, rattled and wept for this deep child who hurts Oh brother called, a reminder of who I am not anymore!. Oh what to do, so rattled with gunshot!. Where do I go, What do I do, Give in to the least control!? Let go and be in the now!. Cease to control Go away you big Monkey's! Peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The poem is very good and the title is combined with the words of the poemWww@QuestionHome@Com Very powerful!Www@QuestionHome@Com Interesting with a taste of suspense!Www@QuestionHome@Com I liked this poem too as it was raw and to the bone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com cool very coolWww@QuestionHome@Com brilliant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com very interesting, perhaps another title tho!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Dying to know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com cool and it was terribleWww@QuestionHome@Com Sounds fearless to me! maWww@QuestionHome@Com it's ok but it could be alot betterWww@QuestionHome@Com You have a lucky contact!. Sage advice for all of us--whatever you call the poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com |