Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> Does this free verse convey a valid, but unusual point?


Question: Does this free verse convey a valid, but unusual point!?
Perilous thought to be lost at sea
feelings of stark isolation
yet
those of self import
must experience
once
a contrary
lost at sea!.!.!.
being lost
in the sea of
humanity
which leads to
acute awareness
of significance lost
yielding oft needed
humility!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
nep!.!.!. that does Ma !.!.!. nicely put!.!.!. helps you to find who, where, and what you are, right!.!.!? can't quite appreciate it otherwise!.!.!. gets ya some bearings!.!.!. sweet wording!.!.!. you're very clever I think!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes you can be sure of that!. I cant speak for every one but i am lost at sea lots of times!.I feel isolated among lots of people but yet i am consumed that i miight as well be on a raft in the sea!.I feel lost , not wanted at times!.I think you wrote this for me!.!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Every so often my mind finds itself at sea, while my feet are planted firmly on the ground!.
Lost in a sea of humanity is something that happens a lot when you're born and raised in NYC!.
Then I come to realize that each of these people means a lot to someone!.!.!.and that my significance to friends and family is a very fortuitous occurrence for me!.

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=PVlBtsxRN!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Perfectly said!. I'm having a more difficult-than-usual time responding to poems today, because in some way they all seem to relate to my circumstance, which I'm shamefully trying to avoid!.
I think she wants to be alone!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sometimes I feel lost in my own sea of poetry!. Then I fling it upon the sea of humanity for their judgment!. That teaches me humility!.

Nice thoughtful valid poem, MaWww@QuestionHome@Com

I am sure that it does!.!.!. I am not going to point it out though
I will let someone else do it!.
I am, once again, humbled by your verseWww@QuestionHome@Com

Valid but not unusual!.
Oft ignored though to great cost!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. And I am deeply reminded by this of one whom!.!.!.!.I have lost contact with!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ah to be shore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com