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Question: Do you like my poem i just wrote!?


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The sky is dark,quiet
Wind is the only sound we hear
Hope that someday sun will shine
Hope that it is near
Faith that we will be saved
For there is no sun night and day
Hopping hopping to be saved

I made it up and i want to now if you like it!.If you cant already tell it is about a world with no sun!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow very inspiring i write story's and poems my self,
when i was 11 my poem got put in a book even though it wasn't that good =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

well at the end you said hopping hopping not hoping hoping or did you mean you were hopping because if you hopped you'd be rescued!?


It's an interesting poem, yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

EXCELLENT!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes!
Its so inspiring! :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

its cool well done Www@QuestionHome@Com

good :0)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its kwl
how old r u!?
good poemWww@QuestionHome@Com