Sounds we crave
To fill empty day
Inviting them into our
Loneliness
Loud TV or music blaring
Needed to fill vacuous space
Erasing fears awaiting us in
Sobering sounds of
SilenceWww@QuestionHome@Com
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To fill empty day Inviting them into our Loneliness Loud TV or music blaring Needed to fill vacuous space Erasing fears awaiting us in Sobering sounds of SilenceWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Silence is either a haven or something!.!.!.!.else!.!.!. I like the dual issue here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com thats a great poem!.!.!. hey you might be just the person to ask!.!.!. do you think all my brain static is just a subconcious escape hatch away from the silence you mentioned!.!.!. or is it my braincells still screaming and moaning about that last mosh that went so wrong!.!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com i never tried composing one!. now i am interested!. like an alternating the lines to the sound of "sound" and the idea of silence!. im not so sure!.!.!.!.but i love reading it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I fill the silence with the written word, not the blare of editorialized 'news,' or with classical music as I work!. Silence can be lonely; it can also be a blessing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'd like to make a suggestion, S1 L1-9 would benefit from !. !. !. oh hell with it, just check this out it'll explain what I'm talking about!. http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=0x3W6hutE!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not me ma, I don't feel a need to insert noise into the blank bits, even the computer fan needs dampening!. I need all the sobering I can get!.Www@QuestionHome@Com stillness!.!.!.!.!. !.!.!.!.!.!.!.with a deafening silence!.!.!. !.!.!.creates a shattering truth!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very good!. But sounds lonely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com WONDERFUL!Www@QuestionHome@Com In silence and stillness so many answers are found, and many fears erased!. This is a good comment on our sad world!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful!.!.!.!.I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's funny how we sometimes crave that solitary moment, only to fill it up with noise! I like this Ma! Morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com That is a baeutiful peomWww@QuestionHome@Com I know the feeling!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com really good!.!.and very true for me hahaWww@QuestionHome@Com |