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And greet the shining star The little points of light become Unseen close or afar It burns so bright, the silvery moon It runs away in fear What did the sun do to make all else Want to disappear So bright and yet it’s oh so sad Dark clouds his only friend Just a world of bright hate until It’s time to descend i wrote this one pretty quicklyWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Two points: If the shadows come out to meet light, they disappear!. The moon shines, it doesn't burn!. It is a reflector!. On the whole though, I think it is a great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com What is the sun seeing as of late But the dancing shadow faries's fate The moon and stars want to know, too But the sunset answers that the show is through Www@QuestionHome@Com I liked this too it's really to the bone and how a poem should be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com pretty coolWww@QuestionHome@Com this is really good(:Www@QuestionHome@Com i love it!!!! Www@QuestionHome@Com |