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Question: A poem for a man called Invisible!?
Invisibility
By S!.F!. Reborn (Koye)
You have walked these streets
as if under a cloak of invisibility
Humility!.!.!.!.!.
Your only companion
in a heart as big as a mansion
Blending into the internet crowd
silently!.!.!.!.!.
Screaming loud
I see you friend
your shoulders hunched for your cover
Yet I still recognize my brother!.!.!.!.!.
What's up Jack!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Great, Semper!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Corner room view
scenes of last lives
distance closing in
so familiar in it's difference
I knew a man once
challenged they called him
victor in wars of words
I see him in golden seconds
touched to have touched
smiling now at thoughts of
a man standing tall!.!.!.still
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Did this happen!?
My son was playing cards one night with 3 other people, 1 from Austrailia, 1 from England, and the other from Canada!.
One fellow kept saying, "Doodle Bugs" when something went wrong!. My son mentioned this, laughing!.
Weird, I thought!. I said ask if his real name is Harold!.
Sure enough, long lost cousin Harold!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
If he's walking the streets, why would he be blending into the 'internet crowd'!?
Consistency dear boy!.
edit - I'm trying my hand at constructive criticism, it's my first go!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I have yet to "see" mr invisible on these internet streets!.Maybe someday I will run into him!.
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Jack!? I thought Jack's off!. No!? Ok, never mind!.
Nice poem buddy!. Loved itWww@QuestionHome@Com
Nice poem :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
NICE!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This Is really great!.
I'd enjoy reading some more of your poems!.
Thanks for sharing!.
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