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Question: Would you comment on some situational prose!?
I left the room for only a moment, you know, to go powder my nose!. Cruelest of fates, my laptop was opened and saw pa sitting in front of it, spittin' mad!. He's Irish, ya know, short fused and the rest!. Turns red in the face in a flash!.
"What in the world are you doing, pa!?" I asked, not wanting to know!.
"I was reading your posts and I just don't get it!. You said the rude guy was blocked!."
"Well, he is, he's not been around for a bit, why!?"
"You stay right there 'till I hit submit!. I've had enough of him!."
Not wanting to further anger pa, I inched my way to the screen!. Too late, he was quicker than I, to my dismay I did read!.!.!.!.

You don't knoe me, but I am pa!.
I'll tell you this only once!.
Stop hiding on this inturnyet
do you knoe how ta be a man!?
I'd like to get my hands on you
you'd be on the ground
crying for your mama
lickety split!. You pompous
pr/ck!. Hey, look, I rimed!
Now leave her alone
she's never dun ya no harm
ya may get around yapoo's block
but you'll never forgit mine

now where's submit!?

!.!.!.!.I apologize to all, but when pa gets riled, there's really no holding him back!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I LOVE IT!.!.!.!.!.!.!. ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Give that man a hug Ma!!!!!!
You just don't know how hard I am laughing!.!.!.!.!.!. nothing like getting an Irishman all riled up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

suckered me in, I can almost buy this as really happening: pa is not the poet, but hell found poetry can be interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's alright, I love your poem and the sense of affection and devotion that pa feels towards you!. :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hide the rifle! Pa is plum mad!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Doncha wish he could jump in there and kick some butt!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOOOO_WEEEE!!!!!! yes yahoot i yelled Www@QuestionHome@Com

KICK HIS PANSY ASSS, PA!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hii feel for you my Dave can be like that good luck Hugs Www@QuestionHome@Com

We love Pa! This is great!Www@QuestionHome@Com