Being gone is
an emptiness
a void in
still vacuum
different
than being
invisible
presence felt
yet not seen
same realm
sharing space
being there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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an emptiness a void in still vacuum different than being invisible presence felt yet not seen same realm sharing space being there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It reminds me of those in my life who are no longer alive!.!.!.they are not visible, yet their presence is felt!. They are watching over me and their presence is felt!.!.!.yet they cannot be seen or even heard!. Few, if any, are simply gone with no impact on the ones they leave behind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This makes sense to me because of the Wolf poems and reading a reference which would have normally gone to my Y/A mail, but didn't!. But then, it makes no sense at all!. Gone, won't be around anymore, period!. Invisible, here but can't be seen, just as you wrote!. I guess that's how it is!. same realm sharing space being there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I sometimes feel that being invisible comes with all the trimmings!.!. your presence is not noted, and you are virtually ignored!.!.!.!.!. It bites!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I can sit in a room with a dozen or so others and feel invisible!. I rather be gone than to have that feeling that nobody cared!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Loneliest feeling in the world to be invisible in a room (or a life) with someone else!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I am not invisible, and I am not gone, yet I am unseen while sharing space with you in my heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That is really beautiful and so true!. Thanks for sharing it!Www@QuestionHome@Com An apt description!. You nailed it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |