Would you comment on Part 3 of wild life poems?

Question: Would you comment on Part 3 of wild life poems!?

Gnashing their teeth, drooling at bits
bullies gather, readying for kill
but sounds rumble from bushes
foes cower in fear, forgetting!.!.!.yet!.!.!.again
wolves strongest weapon remains
the fact they travel in packs

Fools find themselves fiercely entrenched
ends they sought now become their own
young pup has a name all know him by,
it's Mag, short for Magnum, well named, too,
for shooting off mouth in these wilds
by now you know mother wolf is just ma!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

that young pup!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.will lead the pack soon!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.for i know he has the strength!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.just like mother wolf!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Even the greatest warrior among the wolves was once a small pup!.!.!.and the wolf pack is his greatest protection!. There is strength in unity and the pack is his family!.
As far as the identity of the pup and mother wolf!.!.!.knew it all along!.

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=5W9THSi3r!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

PACKS, how did I not see that coming!. I tried guessing the end to this and all I kept coming up with was all the stuff I've learned from nursery rhymes!. Sometimes it's just right there in front of ya!. Great story, and it seems to me that it IS going to have a happy ending!.
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Yeah we all know that young pup!.Maybe one day little pup will learn but maybe not!. Pup is one of a kind to me one day to be a warrior!.!.Good poem Ma!.!. you are a good mother for sure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Leaders are leaders,
Followers are as sheep!.
Some go in, far too deep!.

Fools that enter,where they dare,
Does not get them anywhere!.
Morale of your tale, plain to see!.
Do not make a fool of me!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pride stands tall in wilds
Fear is as breathing
Death is as life watching
The mother can not think
Nor does she feel
She just does
Mother's do !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good one, ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think I'll howl at the moon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Drooling at bits"!.!.!. in the UK is well,
let them tell ya :)Www@QuestionHome@Com