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Question: This is how i felt the day before i turned 30 and the day after!.!.(comments)!?
THE DAY BEFORE!.!.!.!.
No timid voice am i
i boom from mountain tops
no shrinking violet is me
i'll violently strike at thee
shy and retiring!.!.!.!.
hell no, i've only just begun
in my life and at this stage
i'm at the apex of my rage
a powerful powerful being
frustrated at what i'm seeing
so please don't ask me to be quiet
i'll start a bleeding RIOT!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
THE DAY AFTER
(oh boy)!.!.!.
I'll leave it now
i've served my plight
it's the next generations fight!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Nice poems with strong emotion!
You sound like you're gonna pass or sth dude!.!.!.!. chill cause life only begins at 50 (:Www@QuestionHome@Com
"If you are reading this then this warning is for you!. Every word you read of this is useless fine print is another second off your life!. Don't you have other things to do!? Is your life so empty that you honestly can't think of a better way to spend these moments!? Or are you so impressed with authority that you give respect and credence to all who claim it!? Do you read everything you're supposed to read!? Do you think everything you're supposed to think!? Buy what you're told you should want!? Get out of your apartment!. Meet a member of the opposite sex!. Stop the excessive shopping and masturbation!. Quit your job!. Start a fight!. Prove you're alive!. If you don't claim your humanity you will become a statistic!. You have been warned!.!.!. Tyler"Www@QuestionHome@Com
i really like them both!. i could tell the difference in your feelings, very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com