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Question: So, does this poem suck!?
You make me burn
With fiery passion
In the bottomless
Depths of my soul
When I look into you brown eyes
I see the ferocity
Protruding out of those
Star lit eyes
The way you look at me
Like the patience
In a tiger's eyes
Stalking!.!.!.Stalking its prey
Just wondering what you think!. Thanks!. Don't be too cruel please!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Love it!!!
what is it called!?
What do u think of my poem!?
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I like!! But!.!.!.!. Nevermind it was pretty good though!. A lot of anger and thats a good way to express yourself in a poemWww@QuestionHome@Com
poems never suck! they are what they are !.!.!.a window to our soulsWww@QuestionHome@Com