as laughter cracks my sides
tears break my eyes
as my life is shattered by lies
like the sun i will rise
no matter how many tries
is it really worth the prize!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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tears break my eyes as my life is shattered by lies like the sun i will rise no matter how many tries is it really worth the prize!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You should use some different words to express laughter and tears; cracks and break are not the right ones to use!. Www@QuestionHome@Com i love it!.!.!. you are good with wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com |