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Question: NEW POEM!! please tell me what you think!!!?


PLEASE READ MY NEW POEM!.!.!!!!!!! TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!.!.!.!.
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"My Emotions!.!.!."
Brittany!.!.!.


when i am down and need a helping hand!.
i know that you will be by my side,
always knowing what i am going through!.!.!. you understand!.
you are that person i trust, your heart is where i confide

your words whisper sweet melodies in my ear!.
no one can understand the love we share
these are things that no one else is able to hear!.
there is not one person in this world who can compare!.


when i am with you all of my troubles disappear!.
all of the years if dispair and hurt fade as you reach for my hand!.
i hear your heart race as you pull me near!.
finding you must have been a part of god's plan!.


i want to spend the rest of my life beside you!.
through thick and thin, no matter what it may be,
we will find a way, we will make it through!.
so tell me, will you take my hand and agree!.!.!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i love it!!!!


the best part is the word choice!.
There is amazing art and beauty in this poem!.
There was also a good sense of imagery and mood!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's touching, very sweet, written with true emotion!. I hope it's for someone specific!. I think they would love to hear it! Www@QuestionHome@Com