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Question: May I write an Acrostic for Mumbai!?
Mumbai
By S!. F!. Reborn

Much innocence is lost
Under the cloak of terror and
Madness
Bringing painful realization of
A great evil
In the world

My God looks down from Heaven at the
Unholy alliances formed by human
Monsters against His Beloved and it
Brings God to tears that
All His children can't live together
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You may!.
You did!.
He cries!.
Someday, someday, my friend,
we may!.

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An excellent poem on a very sad & horrifying situation!.,,
All around the world ,The world seems to becoming unhinged,, Full of terror & terrorists Fanatics killing in the name of GOD,,,Or just flat out killing because that's all they know Just look at what's going on in the world ,,,Little kids carrying AK 47 Assault rifles,,Suicide bombers,, Weapons of Mass Destruction,,Anthrax through the mail,,,What's this world going to be like in a hundred years!?!? Or rather ,,,Will the World as we know it (as screwed up as it is ) still be here !?!? Here's a scary thought ,,Terrorists with nuclear bombs Chemical bombs,,,,You get the point,,, !.!.!.
I apoligize for rambling,,,,,,,,



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''My my how your emotions fly ,
U know so high in the sky!.
My feelings for those who have gone,
Bring within my heart a string of thorns,
Al those who are involved in this madness,
I am sure have bought nothing more, than sadness!.''


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Yes you may, And it was great as usual!. And what Dondi said!.
Edit: Well said Andy!. You think like a Gentleman and you act like a Gentleman!. Too bad you can`t sprinkle some of that goodness around!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Supposedly the fighting has stopped!. Let us pray for peace!. Your poem simply once again shows the power of the pen!. It has been such a sad few days, it makes absolutely no sense at all!. Thank you for such a beautiful peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bravo and Amen, Semper!. I was watching the news for as long as they would report it!. I had to shed a few tears for the innocence lost!. Almost reminded me of 911 all over again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Amen, Semper, Too much is blamed on God, instead of fallen angels,
Our world grows more crazy and tragic hour by hour!. Most every where!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good write!.

"All the Gods" should yell down to their "angels" and tell them to stop the "Religious" wars!.!.!.!.!. so "all" the children may live in peace!.

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I like it!. There are implications to the "My God" stanza that may be undesirable, in terms of religious tolerance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well said, I await a pillar of fire to destroy all the wickedness and evil in the world!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Does mankind never learn!?It is a scary world we live in to-day!.I worry about the future for my children and grand-children!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AmenWww@QuestionHome@Com

May God have mercy on us!.
Some have none for others
even members of the same faith!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!. All of the dead and the hurt and their families are in my prayers!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well done, Semper!!

So sad, that!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

bravoWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very well said!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very moving poem, Semper!. We can pray for an end to it all!.!.!.someday!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lord, Semper speaks for me!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well done, a sadness in Gods heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com