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Question: What do you think of this poem!?what would you rate it from 1 to 10!? and can you help me with a title!?
A thousand stabs with destinies knife
Charged with the murder of my life
I committed the crime but I plea not guilty
My reason is insanity
I was trapped in her eyes
All I could think of was her lies
It’s not working I'm losing the trial
This jury is in total denial
Losing my life with my witness being broken
From the words she had spoken
Without her they won’t listen to my words
Ready to sentence me to the under world
The prosecutor had my tears at the stand
I didn’t know what to say to start to defend
Here come the verdict
They didn’t believe I lost it
Setting in the electric chair
Taking my last breath of air
Thinking how is today my last day
How did they not believe what I was trying to say
I really couldn’t forget because she was the air I breathed
My heart is broken because she had deceived
Keeping my eyes open to see my last moments of life
Cursing destiny’s bloody knife
I feel death running through me
I opened my eyes and couldn’t believe what I was seeing
My heart had made it with her by its side
But seconds to late my death was watched worldwide
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
WOW
i literally am speechless right now
that is amazing and has so much meaning
10
i dont exactly know what you would call it!.!.!. maybe "the verdict" or something
but truly wow that is incredible, good job
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wow this is really good i mean the best wow if u made this i gotta say nice job !.!.!. a 9!.5-10
and you might want to call it life with a bloody knife!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would rate it 7/10

cause you can not get the tune
because some of the word you are using is blocking te tune from coming

if you get what i meanWww@QuestionHome@Com

10 that as great!. title destinyWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'd rate it 9/10 and title it : DESTINIES' KNIFEWww@QuestionHome@Com