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Question: Could you please rate my poem!?
Far away from beyond the horizon and below the dark skies,
Rust is removed from my heart as the cool breezes dashes into my life,
Indeed a moment of sweetness and tranquility inspires me strength,
Each moment and each hour becoming better than the last one,
Never to worry about all the pains in the past that burdened my hopes,
Destiny has become a source of stability and a path of love,
Sometimes not realizing how beautiful the world is around me!.

Now combine the first letters of each line and you'll see the word "Friends"!.

Please rate my poem!? I wrote this in 10 mins or less :)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
10
i love it
i imagined i was there
i felt the breeze
great imageryWww@QuestionHome@Com

10, it's wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

9!.3 its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com