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Question: Can u give numbers of this poem out of 40!? and please explain do u like it or not!.i need the truth 100% please!?
Quest of myself
Wandering alone to find my soul
To know who am I
What is the aspiration of my role
Why my existence is essence
Someone find for me a sip of skoal
The glass of endurance is brimming
And without solace I like to roll
Beyond knowing the endeavor of life

please I want critic view and real number out of 40!. thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it has potential
give some thought to lines 4 & 5
change them to statements or move them to the end of the poem
in it present form i would give it a 28 Www@QuestionHome@Com

umm !. !. a twenty!? it's good, but not entirely catchy!. you know what i mean!? it didn't hold my attention as much as a poem should, but it has good potentional if you keep working on it!. keep working and don't give up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

what is skoal!?
i would too have to say a twenty!. its good, not catchy, and hard to understand some of the lines!.
the basic idea you have here is good though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com