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Position:Home>Poetry> Please tell me your thoughts of this poem?Question: Please tell me your thoughts of this poem!? Superluminosity
From the universe The superluminosity reaps it An escape frame Fracturing eternity And searing so massive That it withdraws from acceleration Riping through existence!. Of everything wired Ropes tying knots form for G accelerated vectors From drowning along An automative discussion Of evolving clocks!. The atomic distances Scales drag fragments mirror Time crashing it Form symmetrical etherealWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: its really imaginative, did you really write that, you've got a real talent keep it up :):)Www@QuestionHome@Com This is probably my favorite of yours so far, especially for that "Fracturing eternity" line!. I'm the type to think about what that would really mean for those of us that live in time, and how the destruction of eternity would affect everything else !. !. !. Www@QuestionHome@Com I liked it, but I'm a Physics major!. The last stanza needed some punctuation at the end of line 1, middle of line 2 and!.!.!.idk how the last two lines fit together sentence-wise!. Just because its poetry doesn't necessarily mean that you don't need good grammar!Www@QuestionHome@Com loved the poem!. you truly do know how to write poetry!. keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com I THINK ITS RETARDED YOUR NOT A GOOD POET SORRYWww@QuestionHome@Com yeah i think its pretty cool!Www@QuestionHome@Com |