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Question: My first poem!. Is it good!?
To Young Girl

My deare, my dear, I know
More than anothre
What makes your heart beat so;
Not even your own mother
Can know it as I know,
Who broked my heart for her
When the wild thoght,
That she denyes
And has forgot,
Set all her blood astir
And gliterred in her eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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Nice try, you thief!.
Try writing your own poem next time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Let me preface my comments with a warning; I am an armature!. That being said!. I think it is!. I do think you might try normal spelling, The form you use for some of the words just complicates what would otherwise be a very delicate simple and touching verse!. Good job!. Do keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!.

Why her mother!? Why would her mother know!?

That's just crazy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's great!. But next time, do something original and i bet it will be just as good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its ok
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