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Question: Your comment on a fine morning poem!?
Oh, what a beautiful morning, oh, what a wonderful day!.!.!.!.!.!.
This early morn
a trusted voice
greeted me
promised
today
would certainly be
a day of
kindness
and miracles
this special voice
I've come to
believe
it speaks with
authority
it awakened my heart
my eyes are wide
open
already I see
and believeWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was your inner
voice!.
It speaks loudly and
well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A wonderful way to begin the day!. Each morning, your verses point me in the right direction!.
Dragon always seems to find the right tune for each poem he responds to!. Even has a rainbow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Delicate, Sublime!.
If I may make one suggestion!?
Begin the second verse,
"I've come to
believe
this special voice
speaks with
authority!.!.!."
Try it out; and thanks for the lovely work!.
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It was simply beautiful!. It really moved me and more than alot of others that I have read, it seemed to have more feeling and more depth, your deem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Damn it, that Mag fella beat me to the cool answer!.
My Mom's favorite word is "Believe"!. I believe it's a good word, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds like it was the voice of an angel watching over you!.
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=N1jdlsw08!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Reminds me of a song,
and that means!.!.!.
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Good morning to you!.
Nice way to start the day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hear that inner voice, it belongs to you, you may trust it!
Nicely written!Www@QuestionHome@Com
On your poem!.!.!.beautiful!. In structure and content!. Way to go!Www@QuestionHome@Com