What kind of stuff do you write when you are tired...? Answers are Optional !?

Question: What kind of stuff do you write when you are tired!.!.!.!? Answers are Optional !!?

Come sit by the fire with me
Indulge in a glass of this wine
Put your arm around me gently
You make me feel divine

Kick your shoes off
The radios playing
The wine goes down smooth
I think you are staying

Oh listen to this song
It’s my favourite that’s playing
We get up to dance
But end up only swaying

We fall to the floor
On a nice furry rug
Where we snuggle
A little bit more

!.!.!.Please tell me
You do not snore!.
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Mellow and fine!.!.!.like a really fine wine!. Did you first dine!? You know how men whine!. It seems you fell for his line!. As you lay there, supine!. Your poem is Divine!. Nothing here to refine!. Omg somebody shut me up!.

To answer your Q, this is what I write when I am tired!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excuse me for suggesting an improvement!.!.!.!.
We fall to the floor
On a nice furry rug
Where we cuddle
A little more snug

While we are down here
Come closer, some more
But!.!.!.please, please tell me
You do not snore!

I like the mood and progression of this!. Smooooothe and seductive! Nice tired effort, fun last line!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is so mellow!.!.!.so me! I love it!. good work!

read mine!? thanks!
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