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Question: Would you read and comment on All-Seeing Eye's impromptu love sonnet!?
One day, when life is past, and I depart
And I no longer linger at your side,
When time and space and fate hold us apart,
May I still in your heart of hearts reside!.
But while I walk on earth I hope to stay
Forever in your thoughts and your embrace;
And when from mortal life I walk away
May I imagine sadness in your face!.
What better testimony to our love
Could e'er exist than sweet remembrance dear!?
If I yet yearn for you when I'm above
I'll not be lost because your love is near!.
Your love, my love, redeems me utterly,
For here and now, and for eternity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I was going to say what a great poem it is - and it is - but I suddenly thought I'd better rein myself in, because if I get too effusive others won't like it simply because I do!. Great as it is, it probably seems even better to me because of the amount of dross that gets posted on here!. The only problem with it is that it ends too soon!.

And below is a personal confession it seems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Boring tripe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com