Love Right
Love needs not say I love you,
though it’s nice!.
Love needs not say much at all,
when it’s right!.
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Love needs not say I love you, though it’s nice!. Love needs not say much at all, when it’s right!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I've said it before and I'll say it again "Those you love the most, to them can you say the least" !. Neon you are my Min Poe Hero No EWD in this one! A bit shorter than your "epic" poem!.!.!. Great to see punctuation used with respect too!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I don't like it when people use the word love over and over again in a poem!. Introducing or concluding a poem, and mentioning the word love is fine, but if it is in every line, it's overdoing it!. I guess it's alright, and this is my opinion, but it isn't great!. I guess I'm over analyzing it a little bit anyway!. *rambles* basfd;s;Www@QuestionHome@Com There are a few people I love and enjoy being with!. Those I love best I just like being around them and we can be as silent as two posts and still love each other!. Expression, when it happens, should enhance the effect!. I think you have said the same thing in fewer words!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Neon, you rock!. Sometimes the word love is used because people dont know what else to say!. This poem could be in a book explaining how to get it right!. Thank you for sharing, and welcome back!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Full description of the movie "Love Story"!. Women 'd agree with you upon the fist line, but they 'd agree upon the second!. Welcome back, Neonman!Www@QuestionHome@Com A true poetic statement!. Although women often need to hear the words, especially when those women are poets!.Www@QuestionHome@Com In a mininmalist comment I say: PERFECT!Www@QuestionHome@Com love it!. minimalist answerWww@QuestionHome@Com Love understands!.Www@QuestionHome@Com thats good Neon!. another way is when you hear it all day with no words no matter where you are alone or not!. WB signguy!Www@QuestionHome@Com You are so right, actions and glances speak of love!. Good morning stay well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I LOVE IT, LUV IT AND WUV IT!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Welcome back!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That works so much better than: "I love you, so shut up about it!."Www@QuestionHome@Com Right on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |