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Position:Home>Poetry> Would you call this a Monorhyme? Brought to the forefront of my brain by ElaineQuestion: Would you call this a Monorhyme!? Brought to the forefront of my brain by Elaine P!? Afternoon Delight by C!.S!. Scotkin I’m finally home at four, Then stumble in the door Gracie’s on the floor she's sleeping!. The sun has ravaged me!. no breeze goes through a tree I really need iced tea with lemon!. To the shower I go dropping clothes I know eventually I’ll stow in the hamper!. Cool water o’er my head I guess that I’m not dead dry off, then I’m led, my recliner! Elevate sore feet, George and Gracie meet, Afternoon’s great treat, we’re napping! ?2008CSS Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'd like to squelch the ugly rumor That C!.S!. has no sense of humor I guess that I can only assume her years make her a baby boomer Or a late bloomer!. Waddaya think!? She surely ain't no gloom and doomer Much joy and pleasure do I get froom her All Winter, Fall, and through the Summer But I do not suppose, nor can I assume her Wit will last until the Spring!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, I remember this one!. In my recent poem, all the fourth lines of the four stanzas also rhymed with each other!. I guess that could be called a duorhyme(!?)!. The other lines of the poem ended with a rhyme in -ight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I am not sure what I would call it, cute, I think!. Perhaps clever, A poem it is and succintly put, napping is good Pome, is just a mispelling of poem Www@QuestionHome@Com Poem or pome, doesn't matter!. It's master craft!. I loved it!.!.!.and now for some reason I'm yawning and craving good ol' southern sweet tea!.!.!.with lemon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very, Very cute!. It`s freezing here!. Yesterday there were snow flurries!. Last night it was in the low 20`s!. Winter is here!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, this is like Elaine's ryhme scheme!.!.!.what to call this type!.!.!.tri-ryhme!.!.!.aaab, and so on!.!.!.this is a fascinating challenge! Www@QuestionHome@Com Then in this form, is the fourth line optional to rhyme with the preceding three!? AAAX!? Cute pome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Don't know what to call it!. Still researching!.Www@QuestionHome@Com aww VERY NICEWww@QuestionHome@Com |