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Question: Would you call this a Monorhyme!? Brought to the forefront of my brain by Elaine P!?





Afternoon Delight
by C!.S!. Scotkin

I’m finally home at four,
Then stumble in the door
Gracie’s on the floor
she's sleeping!.

The sun has ravaged me!.
no breeze goes through a tree
I really need iced tea
with lemon!.

To the shower I go
dropping clothes I know
eventually I’ll stow
in the hamper!.

Cool water o’er my head
I guess that I’m not dead
dry off, then I’m led,
my recliner!

Elevate sore feet,
George and Gracie meet,
Afternoon’s great treat,
we’re napping!




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'd like to squelch the ugly rumor
That C!.S!. has no sense of humor
I guess that I can only assume her
years make her a baby boomer
Or a late bloomer!. Waddaya think!?

She surely ain't no gloom and doomer
Much joy and pleasure do I get froom her
All Winter, Fall, and through the Summer
But I do not suppose, nor can I assume her
Wit will last until the Spring!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I remember this one!. In my recent poem, all the fourth lines of the four stanzas also rhymed with each other!. I guess that could be called a duorhyme(!?)!. The other lines of the poem ended with a rhyme in -ight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am not sure what I would call it, cute, I think!. Perhaps clever,
A poem it is and succintly put, napping is good
Pome, is just a mispelling of poem Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poem or pome, doesn't matter!. It's master craft!. I loved it!.!.!.and now for some reason I'm yawning and craving good ol' southern sweet tea!.!.!.with lemon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very, Very cute!. It`s freezing here!. Yesterday there were snow flurries!.
Last night it was in the low 20`s!. Winter is here!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, this is like Elaine's ryhme scheme!.!.!.what to call this type!.!.!.tri-ryhme!.!.!.aaab, and so on!.!.!.this is a fascinating challenge! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Then in this form, is the fourth line optional to rhyme with the preceding three!? AAAX!? Cute pome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't know what to call it!. Still researching!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

aww VERY NICEWww@QuestionHome@Com