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Question: Does my poem make sense!?
I have to write a cryptic poem for english class about a character in a book I read!. She gave us a format to follow and it goes like this:
Adjective Adjective Noun
Adverb Verb
Adjective Noun Adjective Noun
Adverb Noun Verb

This is my poem (She said to use a very descriptive words)
Relentless harrowing aggression
Knavishly liberating
Obscure force deft intellect
slowly humanity diminishes

Does this make sense!? Show I "dumb down" some words, for this is only 8th grade english class!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
little confusing, just try to clean it up a littleWww@QuestionHome@Com