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Your poetic flow is good!. some spelling mistakes are there for example adjustment( what is boor!?) there is no word called bore too if you meant "bore" only boredome is there!.in english
a poem can have grammar mistakes for the sake of poetic language spelling mistakes should be avoided!.
keep developing this habit it is good to write poems my suggestion is keep a dictionary besides you to check spellings having a thesaurus will help you find new words too!. good luck!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Love is hell lot of worry
and a ton of sorry!.!.!.
you are always a second behind
never ever on time
Its never the right time !.
Luv is foolish adjustment
just like adjusting to life torment
its always awful frowns and cries
just a smile ,and its not always mine!.!.!.!.!.!.

sorry to wet the so sweet vision of love ;-) personal



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what is love is it something new!?

love to/for u
WHAT IS LOVE
Love is the nectar we all want,
And hold it in our hands like a cup,
How we wish it not to let it go,
As love is the only possession one does show!. !.

And hopes to nurse it for all times
Yet we hanker for more and do not share
What is love is love divine!.
We always think of those times we wanted,
But our love was always daunted,
Hoping that some one will come our way
And upon us his whole beings love spray!.


We still hope some day love will come our way
And lead us from the threshold of sadness
To a zone of timeless happiness;
And it will then only we will know
How love does blossom and glow!.

Where love has gone
Our last kiss was just a parting,
And then we left for another world,
All that I can imagine now you are with another!.
But some may be just worth a smile,
Some may be good looking too,
They may occupy your mind for a while!.
But each time you kiss another,
My image will always you bother,
And make you then really want me,
Oh my dearest one, please come back to me!.
WHERE IS MY LOVE
Last time we met it was perhaps our last!.
Then it was up in our minds to forget the past!.
My instinct tells me you are now in another’s arms!.
But I know it is for just a while no more,
For when your lips turn dry you know
You will thirst for more, yes I mean more!.
Only then you will know that you want
I back in your arms all the more!.
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Bukkie-boy, if you had really "linked-back" as you claimed, you'd know, wouldn't you!? I see you decided to ignore my double-dare!.!.!.full of nothing but hot air I see!.

This poem makes about as much sense as one of Buk's, but it's far better written!. (Still rubbish though!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

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your poem is as sweet as the subject!. Love!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Its not like a poem!. Better luck next time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i loved the simpleness of the poem it is just beautiful in it's own way
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Iano #382!?
Is that you!?!? Www@QuestionHome@Com

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even a 2nd grader can do that ,it shows that ur still 6 years old by mindWww@QuestionHome@Com

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