A peach can be
sniffed for freshness
but never snuffed out
peeled for eating
yet never stripped
bruised in handling
and never go bad
her pit is what
makes her strong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like my new poem, it's called "Fruit of the Spirit"?Question: Do you like my new poem, it's called "Fruit of the Spirit"!? A peach can be
sniffed for freshness but never snuffed out peeled for eating yet never stripped bruised in handling and never go bad her pit is what makes her strong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I would like to see the last two lines as a separate stanza!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very interesting!Www@QuestionHome@Com An interesting metaphor for the core of a person's being!. I like it very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Good strong metaphor!. Yes, I like your new poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I really like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wonderful to the core!! I love this!Www@QuestionHome@Com I like the way you think!.!.!.!.!. maWww@QuestionHome@Com that was nice!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |