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Question: Do you like my new poem, it's called "Fruit of the Spirit"!?
A peach can be
sniffed for freshness
but never snuffed out
peeled for eating
yet never stripped
bruised in handling
and never go bad
her pit is what
makes her strong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I would like to see the last two lines as a separate stanza!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very interesting!Www@QuestionHome@Com

An interesting metaphor for the core of a person's being!. I like it very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good strong metaphor!. Yes, I like your new poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful to the core!! I love this!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the way you think!.!.!.!.!.

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that was nice!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com