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Question: Here is another poem I am consitering sending for publication do you all think it's good enough!?
"Bits of wizdom"
Iv'e learned a vital lesson,
worth more then gems or gold,
I've learned through
tribulations to bend but never fold!.
Iv'e learned to keep on learning
to exersize my mind and search for
hidden treasures, that beakon me to find!.
Iv'e learned to keep on careing for
those i prong to flee, and learned to keep
on giving for those who turn to me!.
Iv'e learned a bit of wizdom along life's
rocky way, and that simple guide to living is to
be grateful for today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The only thing I would change to get it published is the spelling!. Some busy publishers won't read past the first couple of mistakes!.
Be careful of the apostrphes, it should be I've (I have)
beckon not beakon, unless you mean a beacon (the light that beckons you toward it) exercise and wisdom with s not z
As for the content, it's beautiful!. Good luck!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Honey, we all know that once you put it on the internet you cannot publish it anymore due to copyrights!.
Next time don't put it on the internet ok!
And about the poem, I think it's really good!.
Nice usage of metaphors and simile!.
Oh!! Add some personification and onomatopoeia Www@QuestionHome@Com
definitelyWww@QuestionHome@Com