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Question: The goodbye poem!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
goodbye to you, the strong young man
fast and filled with dreams
my legs too frail to keep your pace
so long ago it seems
farewell to fairest beauty
so delicate and kind
we've traveled hand in hand for miles
but I must leave my love behind
the mighty oak beside my window
once a sapling so afraid
we grew together year by year
I will miss your sheltering shade
with autumn fast approaching
summer sleeps so sound
and I will long have left this place
before the first leaf hits the ground
I cannot shake this sickness
as hard as I did try
crying softly in my pillow
so afraid to die













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this is a great poem and truly heartfelt
i can tell by the way it's written that it was light and letting go yet so hard and heavy at the same time!. it was very beautiful and it leaves a mark!. truthfully, i really liked it!. And the greatest thing is that it shows hardships being weighed down on someone, and the person instead of trying to hold them up just lets go!. its fabulous!.
read mine anybody:
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please answer and give your opinion!!
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Beautiful!. Lovely rhyme and rhythm :)
Answer mine!?
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Nice idea, but the rhythm goes walkabout in the middle somewhere!. With a bit of revision and polishing, will be a worthy effort!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love your style of writing
it is very beautiful, some of
the best writings come from
sad and tragic experiences!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are so danged talented in this tone!
You nail the voice and feeling!.!.!.
the more I read, the more I felt his depletion!.
Another fine write, my friend!.

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Dark, tragic, beautiful!. Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Could you spare a tissue!?
Very moving, almost hauntingly so!.
Thank you for sharing Poppet!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey, kid, if being angry makes you write like this,
stay angry, man!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com