Would you critique this poem?

Question: Would you critique this poem!?

The greenwood sighs and shudders
The west-wind wails and mutters!.!.!.

Gray clouds crawl across the sky
The moon hides her face as the sunlight dies!
And mankind soon shall realize
The Bringer of Storms walks tonight

No mortal dare to meet the glare

Of the Eye of the Stormbringer
For he is the lightning slinger
The glory singer
The gallows reaper!

Upon his shoulder, ravens
His face like stone, engraven
Astride a six-hoofed stygian beast
He gathers the fruit of the gallows trees!
Driving legions to victory
The bringer of war walks tonight!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I see talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's very interesting and dark!. it kinda reminds me of the headless horseman!."The gallows reaper!" "Astride a six-hoofed stygian beast He gathers the fruit of the gallows trees!"Www@QuestionHome@Com

i've got the perfect song to go with it!.!.!. Wolf Moon by Type O Negative!.!.!.Check it out on LimewireWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very good but sounds like somebody is gonna get hung from one of those ghastly trees!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it as I can see a picture of it when reading the poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm a mortal that WOULD meet the glare!. I love storms!. Now snap out of this depression baby!! I miss my happy guy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dave is right ^ ^ ^

You need to read the good stuff, not us silly Yahooligans!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A little bumpy, but the middle parts are fine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh that's hawt! Ollie felt something move down there a little !. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty good :) I like dark poems lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty good!
"We shall see"!, said the blind man!.Www@QuestionHome@Com