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Question: Have you found the one you know you will someday write!?
This was going to be the one
the one that peeled your skin
back from your skull and made
you gush on the screen
blinded by stale blood
and exposed bone!.
This was going to be
the human heart in your hand
the shattered glass eye
that saw every color of truth
I had to offer!.
This was going to be the purebred
that raped the mutt
and turned the words on their edge!.
I was hiding it but I have forgotten
how dark it was in there!.
This was going to be
the one
but I can't find it any-
more!.
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or are you afraid to look!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gezuz!.!.!.what bee crawled up that one's posterior anatomical caverns!.

proves my point I suppose!.

As always when reading your words I can SEE them in my mind!. No I have not found the one, or maybe I have and just don't know it!.
It doesn't really matter anymore anyway!. No one will see it anyway!. I have enough cruelty in my life I don't need anonymous children getting their jollies from trying to be hurtful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Better and better!.

I have found the one, and I have lost the one!.
I know the words are here, buried deep in
everyday life!. I find one or two occasionally,
and try to put pen to paper, but so far it has
been an odyssey of errors, humbling me at
every turn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Maybe you need a personal trainer!.

I know D, that's not rocket science advice, seems there is a lot of that going around and it hasn't helped!.
So I would take the personal touch over the scholarly remarks any day, anytime, anywhere!.


I hope this helped!.
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And if you found the one, would would you write about after!? Having written the one that would kiss all others good night, what vision would be left to view the new morning!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've had many of those ones in you that you've found and offered!.
If they've just been hint of "The Big One" coming, ol' Fred Sanford better watch out!.

'Scuse me while I take cover!.
Fire in the hole!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You make Sodom and Gomorrah seem like a tourist resort!.!.!. is that good!? For me it wasn't!. I've already written mine, and you all are part of it!.!.!. perhaps I should now erase ______________________________Www@QuestionHome@Com

Then I'm sittin' right here till you find the rest of it, because this one started off as the one!

The words were right, so right!.!.!.
maWww@QuestionHome@Com

I thought I found the one! Till it was raped from Me with a gun! Cant say that was any fun!.But hey,it was all done in the sun!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this one a lot - I'm in a dark place and this feels!.!.!.comfy!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Looks like you found yours! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes, i found him!. i wrote him off a long time ago!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Flashback!.!.!. my last date with a wanton dog!.

(inspired by pure bred!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am still working on it!.!.!.!.!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

Just like the rest of your stuff - worthless, pointless, clueless!. However, I suppose you need to do something to pass your time in the sanatorium, and as long as the rest of the inmates enjoy it then you're not really doing any harm!. Except, of course, to poetry!. Wotta laugh, eh!?

Ps!. I read your (and Ma's) heart-warming, friendly, generous remarks about me in your response to G-Unfit's question!. God bless you, too!. You need it!.

Nah, "Cloun", I didn't say poetry was pointless!.!.!.but this ain't poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com