An old poem of mine. Just sharing.?

Question: An old poem of mine!. Just sharing!.!?

I live my life for disappointment
feeling trapped on my endless circle
forever wishing once;
broken this pattern be
deeper and darker
each new shining moment becomes,
when only held each morning
my heart up to the rising sun
to watch it set on me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Beautiful : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Get over yourself and right some real poetry!.

If not then people will get over you pretty quickly!.

None of the great poets sat around writing about their silly depression all the time and I'm sick of hearing about it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is a good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com