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Question: Should i give this poem to my girlfriend!?
My heart shines like the sun when i think of you!.
Your eye's glisten like the stars when i look into them!.
You are the glowing beauty of the moon at night!.
It feels like this world was made for us!.
To be out here together!.
In love for ever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
yes did u write it yourself!?
i like it, it's very expressive but easy 2 understand
she'll love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

id be flattered if you gave that to me!.

yes you should!. but you should put it in a nice hand made card and take her out to dinner!.

but only if you guys have been going out for a while!. if its only been like a month id watch out cause you dont want to scare her away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!.

Edit:
Ouch, I was RIGHT! My first thought was right!
After 3 years this is all you can say !.!.!. !?!?!?
''To be out here together''

Sorry, but this is your first poem ever, and you don't love her enough or somewhere, there is a problem !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If you have been together a while yes it is sweet romantic letting her know how you feel and it would get you major brownie points with herWww@QuestionHome@Com

YES! i would love for my boyfriend to give me a poem!.!.!.I think every girl would!. read my poem!.!.!.!.and rate it!.!.!.
http://www!.teenink!.com/raw/Poetry/articl!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If I were she, I'd like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'd say so!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

awwwwwwww yeah its really pretty i think she'll love itWww@QuestionHome@Com