Here is my poem. Give you interpretation and opinion please...?

Question: Here is my poem!. Give you interpretation and opinion please!.!.!.!?

The Bride (Didn't Give Up)

Excitement
Anxiety
Unity
False Contentment, for a spell
Irritation
Adjustment
Denial
False Acceptance, as well
Coping, Hoping
Torn, Let Down
coping, hoping
Torn , Release
Self -Assertion
little hope
Change Of Focus
Still care
Prayer, Prayer, Prayer!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

huh!?

edit!. Oh ok I see!.
I can picture a woman going through struggles
from a bride to a wife to being a mother
almost her lifetime!. The end is a little sad
because it seems like without hope she looks for God
to cope with her life!.
Its probably a very fast paced lifestyle!.
ups and downs!.
very emotional

thats about it!.!.
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In my opinion, poetry should contain some creative way to express a feeling!. But you're just listing adjectives and emotions!. Paint these with imagery and bring the poem to life! Although I get the style you are going for, instead I am left feeling a bit dry!.!.!. A good poem ought to leave its reader with a lasting impression!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see a bride at a church, thinking if she should marry the man at the alter!. She is thinking back at all the things that they went through, good and bad!. But then she remembers that she too is imperfect, so instead of leaving the decision to her, she prays to God for guidance, asking him if he is the right man for her!. She knows that God knows the best decision for her, so she prays, and prays, and prays!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmmm
Its good!.
It will be better if you add more words!.
really, revise more , i want you to write this again!.
waiting!.

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