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I’ve seen it told in form not mine, penned by people I’ve read before, spoken in other words and I wonder then which metaphor becomes my father, which similes can remodel his place in my story if ever I write my own!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You have written it!. All of the emotions in this poem (MY emotions, however intense or mild they may be, are: angst, confusion, shyness, trepidation!.!.!.) serve as the metaphor and on some occasions, the simile in accordance with the wish to capture the father's place in his story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Happy Once upon a time poetry allows us to share a moment, a relationship, (a smell even) that some-one else has experienced!. It can provoke a happy feeling of 'yes!.!.!.that's how it was' or a sad 'I didn't have this' !.!.!.!.both emotions are welcomed by fellow poets!. I wait in patient anticipation for your 'Once upon a time'Www@QuestionHome@Com Now, what were you saying about being hesitant, in writing poetry!? I'd say you've done the write, done the poem, done it well, knew you did it well, capped your pen, and sat there and smiled! HA! Good Morning! This write stands alone and becomes you!! Think about that a bit!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com If ever you write your own I think you will discover the right ones to let your story be told!. I've seen you tackle some very sensitive subjects before and am sure you will do the most sensitive one of all justice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well then, my friend, this is something you shall have to tell us, when your story you tell!.!.!.in your words, not other words!. maWww@QuestionHome@Com Once again upon a time, very poetic, and the rest sounds classic historic, lovely read, thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well penned! I, as any body else, relate to this questions in hand!. How can anybody express his/her feelings in full !We shall see as you start writing your own!. I liked this poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com When are you gonna get published Senore!? <---tengo frustracion con piecas aqui y alla con su trabojo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com In the past several months I've learned SO much from and about all of you!. I believe we all share some very common threads and look forward to hearing your story!. I think this poem is great, by the way!Www@QuestionHome@Com Actually I am learning a lot about you from your poetry!. Much more than I ever did from your funny questions!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You have certainly penned this one well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You have shared many chapters, and are doing a fine job!. This is thoughtful and well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com If you write it, they will read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not to bad for a average size guy!. Really well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like your poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wonders will cease!.!.!.!.you will knowWww@QuestionHome@Com Good stuff ; ) Now put them all together and find a publisherWww@QuestionHome@Com You have done it!. This is what poetry should do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |